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Shinobi Kaiku is a new alternate universe Naruto based rpg. It is set in the same time as the series but with an alternate storyline, you however may choose where that story leads.
 
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PostSubject: Kagami Clan   Kagami Clan Icon_minitimeFri Oct 22, 2010 8:53 am

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Clan Certification

Name: Kagami (Literally means; Mirror)
Symbol: Kagami Clan CharmedSymbol (*This symbol is used on items of clan members' clothing*)
Kagami Clan Kagami (*When clan members turn 18 years of age, they are given this tattoo which is the kanji for 'Mirror' to show that they have proved themselves*)
Description/Abilities: Members of the Kagami clan can combine the elements of Suiton and Fuuton to create the Ice element and can manipulate it to their will.
Special Characteristics: Practically all members of the clan have blond hair and are very pretty to look at.

Jutsu:
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History: The Kagami clan originate from the village of Kirigakure, and the main branch still lives there today. They had survived through the claughter of all the clans back when their village was in the dark ages, and now are thriving more than ever. Their history is something every clan member is proud of and passes down the tales to their children. The elders of the clan have made many different scrolls also containing the very early history.

The Kagami clan dates back to even before the First Great Shinobi War when they were merely peaceful sculptors that specialised in making things with ice. The villagers would come and buy all their wares and be fasctinated every time by how pure the ice was. Nobody knew of their abilities, and wouldn't do for quite a while. When Isamu Kagami was born into the clan, everyone knew he was destined for greatness. He excelled as a shinobi all the way up to the status of a Jounin, even though many thought his skills would rival that of their Kage. Despite this, Isamu was a good man and didn't do anything to overthrow their leader. Instead, he made the Kagami's best kept secret one of the talking points of the century. He used his abilities in battle flawlessly, and everyone started to respect the Kagami clan for their wonderful talents. After this, Isamu settled down to have children, and his children inherited the clan's bloodline in the highest form.

Within only 20 years, the Kagami had many aspiring young shinobi that started to travel the world. Seperate individuals made their homes in other villages such as Konoha, or Suna. The main branch of the Kagami clan were so proud of all these amazing happenings that had come about just from the one man who was now living with his wife in Kirigakure too. His oldest son had just given birth to his first child, a girl named Junko who was also to create history. Junko became a high-level Medical Ninja due to her precise chakra control. She wasn't born with huge amounts of chakra, but the chakra she was born with was to be used for good for many years to come.

Every single thing that happened was recorded by the elders in the clan, so that not one great thing would go un-noticed. This clan was also one of the first to keep the birth certificates of all the babies that were born into their ever growing family. Even those who had settled out in different villages sent copies of birth certificates to be kept forever.

Along with this rising fame came rising wealth too. The clan bought a large clan residence at the back of Kirigakure where everyone could come and live with plenty of room. Practice of the ninja arts was deemed to be essential every day. There was no member of the Kagami clan that was a civilian, needless to say. They all married shinobi, for otherwise they would become disgraced and forced to leave the clan.

One of the lesser members of the clan that was only Chuunin in rank married a Jounin and had five children together; the oldest of which was named Aimi Yoshiko Kagami, the first child to be given a middle name. Middle names were said to be sacred amongst the clan as it meant it doubled the greatness a child was due to recieve, so everyone kept a close watch on this girl.

Members that went down in history:

~* Isamu Kagami; the man that changed the clan's direction (Status: Deceased)
~* Junko Kagami; the most gifted Medical Ninja the clan had ever seen (Status: Deceased)
~* Hoshiko Kagami; the one to start the secondary branch of the clan in Konoha (Status: Deceased)
~* Chika Kagami; youngest daughter of Isamu Kagami and a profound elder (Status Alive)
~* Sora Kagami; eldest son of Chika who died in the Third Shinobi War (Status: Deceased)
~* Aimi Yoshiko Kagami; the first clan member to be given a middle name and considered to be a blessing to the clan (Status: Alive)

Members: This clan is open to everyone apart from Missing Ninja (due to the clan being fiercely loyal to their respective villages).


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PostSubject: Re: Kagami Clan   Kagami Clan Icon_minitimeFri Oct 22, 2010 4:54 pm

Sorry but I cannot approve of this.

All advanced bloodlines in the naruto universe can only fuse 2 basic elements to create a single advanced one limited only to them. You wish to fuse an already advanced one with a 3rd basic to create a 2nd advanced one (on a side note, according to official naruto sites Sand is Fuuton+Doton not Suiton and Doton). According to the Description/Abilities by the time a member reaches Spec. jounin rank he can already use 4 elements. Even Kages can't use more than 3 basic elements yet you want 4 (of which 1 is advanced)! And that's not even counting the possibility for side branching in medic or the infamous op fuuinjutsu. And if that wasn't already too much, they have larger than average chakra pools or better chakra manipulation

Final Judgement: You've spread out their special characteristics too much, making them jacks of all trades rather than specialize in something. If they were the weak kind of jacks this wouldn't be a problem but these are the really really powerful kind of jacks.

Ether tone it down or add some negative traits because they are way too unrealistic as they are now.
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PostSubject: Re: Kagami Clan   Kagami Clan Icon_minitimeFri Oct 22, 2010 6:15 pm

Aimi, I have a glass clan that you can use . . . Pm me if you wish to use it.
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PostSubject: Re: Kagami Clan   Kagami Clan Icon_minitimeFri Oct 22, 2010 6:31 pm

I've changed some things in this clan, but thanks Splice. If I can't get this clan approved I'll PM you.
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PostSubject: Re: Kagami Clan   Kagami Clan Icon_minitimeSat Oct 23, 2010 9:41 am

Can I get this checked please? If it's still not right, tell me what to do in order to make it right. I want to make a character with this clan.
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PostSubject: Re: Kagami Clan   Kagami Clan Icon_minitimeSat Oct 23, 2010 5:00 pm

Aowol the Slim wrote:

All advanced bloodlines in the naruto universe can only fuse 2 basic elements to create a single advanced one limited only to them.
I recommend creating a clan with Ice release, it will allow the same basic properties to glass. I want to keep it as Two elements needed for clan fusion not three.
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PostSubject: Re: Kagami Clan   Kagami Clan Icon_minitimeSat Oct 23, 2010 9:30 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Kagami Clan   Kagami Clan Icon_minitimeSun Oct 24, 2010 7:24 pm

Can I get this checked again please?
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PostSubject: Re: Kagami Clan   Kagami Clan Icon_minitimeSun Oct 24, 2010 7:26 pm

Would you like to use my glass clan Aimi?
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PostSubject: Re: Kagami Clan   Kagami Clan Icon_minitimeSun Oct 24, 2010 8:18 pm

Approved 1/2

Although I'm kinda surprised you didn't include the Demon Ice Mirrors and the Ice Needle Storm (I'm assuming this is a recreation of Haku's KG), but then again who am I to judge.
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PostSubject: Re: Kagami Clan   Kagami Clan Icon_minitimeSun Oct 24, 2010 8:23 pm

No thanks, Splice. Now that I've made this clan I'll make my character with it. Thanks for the offer though =)

I didn't use those since I didn't want to copy Haku's KG, actually. I knew if I had the Demon Ice Mirrors people would think I'd copied it.
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PostSubject: Re: Kagami Clan   Kagami Clan Icon_minitimeSun Oct 24, 2010 9:02 pm

approved 2/2
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