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    PostSubject: Jibamoru, Yuudai   Jibamoru, Yuudai Icon_minitimeSat Feb 26, 2011 5:43 am

    名前【Name】: Jibamoru, Yuudai
    裏名【Alias】: Yuu (Close Relations), Daisuke (False Alias)
    自然な性【Gender】: Male
    歳【Age】: 29
    出生年月日【Birth Date】: September 19th
    背【Height】: 5'11
    体量【Weight】: 180 lb
    肌の色【Skin Tone】: White
    目の色【Eye Color】: Ruddy Crimson / Dull White
    毛色【Hair Color】: Cocoa Brown
    血液型【Blood Type】: O-

    官等【Rank】: S-Rank Missing-Nin
    村里【Village】: Sunagakure no Sato
    国【Country】: Kaze no Kuni

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    風体【Appearance】
    There's one super fine picture. Are you not sated? Fine. When posed opposite of Yuudai the thing that strikes one is the overall slightness of the man. Not a physically imposing person at first glance of his slim limbs, average height and youthful look of the ex-Sunagakure Shinobi do anything but distinguish.

    The smooth skin and boyish face belay a body that has been there and back, a form which has seen more than its fair share of wars, brawls, fights, apprehensions and even the infrequent coital tryst. Scars and memories of abrasions long faded layer the taut muscles of the Shinobi's body, a slender yet firm torso maintained by the constant movement and stimulus provided by its owner. A belly that is too flat and well defined slopes upwards to his pectorals and shoulders which are sculpted into a “Y” shape. The angular shoulders themselves narrow as they climb upward towards the sharp point that begins the chin and jaw; the borderline of Yuudai's face. On the opposite side of the torso a slim waist descends to slim legs etched with muscle. This is but a small and vague overview of his build. Shall we get into the details then?

    Let's start from the top shall we? A crop of choppy, cocoa locks spring from his hairline in all directions, an irreverent “fuck you” to proper grooming and combing utensils while the remainder is kept properly subdued in pony-tail fashion. Spiky and unruly, chocolate locks frame the cherubic face of the freelance Shinobi in an ever shifting copper frame that his lack of facial hair fails to close. There are varying grades of hair all jammed onto one head, the length, the grade, the texture and the style itself varies, a style unto itself due to Yuudai's infamous grooming negligence. In the front the predominant style is a short and choppy rocker-ish coif. The strands that fall into his eyes could be called bangs if there was rhyme or reason to them, but as the unplanned mess that they are, these locks are merely a segment of the formless chaos atop the ninja's head. Pulling away from the shorter, choppier strands which fall into his face, the main tangle of Yuudai's hair can best be described as strangely tame and long in length. Bound by a decorative hair band, the mane is remarkable for lax and seemingly well-kept the tail is despite how little care or attention Yuudai gives the mess atop his head.

    Description of the rest of his body hair is lacking because that particular item is very poorly represented, as his chest, arms, neck, back, etc. are relatively hair free. His legs however sport their fair share of hair, a reminder that Yuudai does not avoid the nuisance of body hair, rather he's predestined to lack it.

    Beneath the naturally sloppy coif lies Yuudai's face, as naturally fine and sculpted as the hair that rests atop it is a mess. By grace the male is blessed with beauty that requires no work or upkeep, though he chooses to hide it beneath his face-mask, and dramatic features which make his looks all the more striking. A smooth and wrinkle-less brow is punctuated by two fine cocoa arches of hair, symmetrical eyebrows that hover above two lively and yet somehow sobering eyes. The left is dull white in hue and depth-less in scope, the large and colorless iris both innocent and soulful. The right in contrast is a ruddy crimson, pock-marked long the bottom lashes by two blue birthmarks, and seems to almost be it's pair's antithesis. The beautiful orbs are laced in lush lashes, silky fine points which curl away from the gorgeous spheres. Nestled between his eyes and falling downwards is a fine and pointed nose, noble and straight when he is calm but with nostrils that flare unbelievably when he is agitated or excited. Or pissed. Rounding out this vertical assessment of his face is a thin-lipped mouth, fine and drawn, the last delicate touch on an angular face bracketed by high cheekbones, underscored by a pointed and smooth chin, and rounded out by two identically unremarkable (save for the slight way they stick out) ears. Yuudai's expression range is as wide and varying a spectrum as can be found, from the dull and disinterested blank stare of one perpetually bored (say if he had to read through this tedious application), touching upon the disdainful in either scowl or smirk, and finishing in the scope of a jovial smirk, it is fair to call the former Suna-Nin a very animated fellow.

    However it is in his subtle build that his genius lies. At a first glance the forgettable former shinobi of the Sand can be mistaken for a lightweight, or a soul that is easily tossed to the side due to a tragic flaw in design. As was said earlier nothing remarkable could be excavated nor should some inherent understanding of the disgraced ninja's ability be garnered by a mere glance, and yet Yuudai's build carries many clues as to his specialty. Rail thin, the body is naturally inclined to more of a velocity based attack, utilizing speed, momentum and balance to overcome very average strength.

    A streamlined upper torso boasts one of the more impressive wingspan-to-body size ratios that one can hope to encounter. Though the shinobi stands just a whisker below six feet, his arms when held straight out span a distance which greatly dwarfs that, the width of which is six feet five inches. Yes his wingspan is a full six inches longer than his cumulative height, a discrepancy that gives Yuudai a gawky, if not awkward stance. His well toned (and in keeping with the rest of his body: slight) torso seems to be in a constant half-slouch, a posture which makes him look lazy, shiftless or unmotivated. Nothing could be further from the truth, though we're talking build right now and the dynamics of his stance and the beauty of his movement can wait. The arms themselves are willowy and sinuous, extended enforcers which are sure and more powerful than their slight appearance would indicate. His shoulders, one of the few places where bulging and defined muscles can be found upon Yuudai's upper body, segue from thin body to slight arms, providing the basis for his strikes with fist or otherwise. Biceps and triceps, firm in their own right and yet not overwhelmingly bulky, round out his upper arm, worked to a sharp point, so that Yuudai's arms walk that fine line between finely muscled and over muscled; strong enough to add some power to his strikes, but not so bulky as to detract from his flexibility.

    In subtle mimicry of his rather impressive arms, Yuudai's legs are on the long side as well, lending an overall impression of a four limb spider. They themselves harbor more mass than can be found in the upper regions, firm muscles which knot at the joints but ripple carelessly under the skin, long and lean in the thighs while his calves almost appear to be balls of muscle hung high on thin poles (the tendons, shins, and tibia are thin extending downward until they meet the angular protrusion that are his ankles).

    As vital to the man's physical standing as his formidable lower body and and limbs, Yuudai's extremities are the front lines so to speak for his assault. Without hands stiffened by combat or feet quickened through experience, the speed and violence that the Shinobi is capable of bringing down on a soul wouldn't be nearly as effective. Hands that are wide and coarse extend from bony wrists, the tan color of the backhand in contrast to the pale of the palm. The knuckles protrude as violent ridges, harsh joints used to strike the soft parts of an enemy. In contrast to the roughness of the hands are the fingers, long, lean, and what one could describe as elegant, if not for the power that tenses the digits. The tips of the fingers are rough however, due to the style of life and combat that Yuudai is used to, their simplistic conflicting aesthetic and feel a perfect summary of the soul known as Jibamoru Yuudai.

    Most people, if forced to walk, jog, or run for too long will complain of pain in their feet, back and lower legs. Yuudai does not count himself amongst these inferior masses, and relies on his near indefatigable legs to carry him further into battles that would test the limitations of even the hardiest warriors. The base that provides these enduring pistons with their foundation, two slender extremities which lend to the overall feeling of gawkiness, though they themselves contribute to the man's own natural speed aptitude.

    In motion the physical character of Yuudai is fully exposed and the athletic planning that makes such unparalleled movement is revealed. Muscles shift and flex in an inherent quest to achieve the quickest speed possible in the shortest amount of time with an utmost nod to control, accomplishment of such is achieved at a level that many souls cannot comprehend, much less attain. The youthful expression that usually dominates the landscape of the man's face is instead replaced with a look of calm focus, his face at once serene and fierce like that of a bird of prey's right as it begins its descent for helpless prey.

    His motion and strikes are fluid, sinuous, unparalleled when it comes to the high level of body control and timing, and startling reaction speed which makes catching Jibamoru or even keeping up with the Shinobi a chore. Through improbable leans and instinctual magnetism towards balance, Yuudai's motion is direct, quick and deadly. Sureness seeps from his every attack and strike a confidence in unlikely angles that can only be borne out of experience and intense drilling. When attacking regardless of how unconventional the move seems there is a very small chance that the attack has not been practiced countless times in one variation or another by the former Suna-Nin. At rest Yuudai's posture and stance seem to be the antithesis of the skilled structured chaos that make him such a dangerous enemy, but nothing can be further from the truth. The ninja is impossible to catch flat footed and though he seems slightly slouched and disinterested, the truth is that a slightly hunched position with a moderately wide leg stance is the ideal rest position in between strenuous battle, not just for the shinobi but many veterans of battle.


    風格【Personality】
    Such a long life has a way of muting personality traits, powerful characteristics which might have defined a person in earlier stages. To describe someone who has lived for so long in one dimension or with just one facet of his psychology and use blanket terms such as “lazy”, “violent”, or “funny as all balls” (note; all of these apply to the Shinobi in one way or another) would not do him justice and would rob an interesting soul of his due.

    The first dimension, and perhaps the most prevalent aspect of his persona is the Yuudai that you are likely to encounter on a boring or uneventful day is a drowsy despondent individual. When at rest the ninja lounges like no other, his form spilling over the seat, or shelf, or wall, post, or hell, even a person with an unaffected air of cool. His eyes rove sleepily from behind heavy lids, mouth droopy with boredom and the threat of a yawn; his entire expression that of a man who has seen it all, experienced too much, and would rather be left at home resting than dragged along to whatever you are offering thanks. Yuudai is just as likely to greet the uninspired, your cliched and your ho-hum with an extensive sigh, although if something does catch his interest, well it's like flicking a switch and the difference between a well lit room and one layered in darkness.

    When Yuudai's interest is piqued he is a man possessed, frenetic energy courses through him, and the dull facial expression which might have occupied his face only seconds before is gone, replaced with a sharp, analytical countenance. In this state it is as if he has just now come awake, complete with a grin that he seems powerless to quell, an excited smirk which serves as a clear marker of his enthusiasm. In this state Yuudai is more an anxious predator than a lounging pet, the languid and lackadaisical movements transformed to an excited pacing, straightened posture, tension and enthusiasm accentuated by his every movement. When seated there is a nervous energy, displayed by anything from a rapid tapping of his foot, to an impatient tempo that underscores his demeanor, words or thoughts.

    In fact this thinly veiled pretense of Yuudai as a man of very little emotion is one of the least accurate descriptions of his personality there is despite the wide range of topics that this facade of disinterest greets. In any given situation Yuudai's reaction, temperament, and attitude are liable to change. Perhaps a better term for the Shinobi would be capricious, a steady study in hot then cold; mean and nice. His various responses to certain stimuli and company constantly keep those who do not know him on edge perhaps waiting for something neither shiftless or apathetic to spring forth. Save for Houzuki of course, whose own reliance and support for Yuudai through the years gave their partnership a more intimate angle than anything either had ever experienced with anyone else. Starting with his relationship with Hyuuga might be a good place to begin, as the two spend so much time together. When able to rely on the proximity of the other, both were decidedly more lazy; their disposition directly tied into the understanding of just what it meant to have a partner so equal to them in ability and temperament. Knowing that only half of their full effort Should be enough for any situation came at the price of making both seem laid back, detached, and cool. In his eyes there was no reason for him to be excited or even all that worried as long as Houzuki was nearby, and for his slightly other side the same could've been said. Team chemistry did not suffer because of this borderline complacency that each harbored, in fact the complacent attitude was only possible due to the frightening way they complemented each other. Towards each-other there was a quiet understanding, usually the two not needing to exchange words in order to reach an understanding. When they did speak directly to each other the conversation was wild and irreverent, two spirits lost in their own channels of communication. More was said in the cryptic way they spoke to each other within a snippet of dialogue than could be stressed, and the sideways glances that made up their communication when in battle held enough information for them to accurately play off each other. Summed up: they were on the same page in an almost abnormal way. At least, until Hyuuga Houzuki's untimely death.

      * 【Mental Constitution】: Obsessive-Compulsive, Calm, Analytical
      * 【Phobias】: Iatrophobia, Merinthophobia, Tomophobia, and Topophobia
      * 【Idiosyncrasies】: People-watching, Reading, Testing his limits
      * 【Handedness】: Ambidextrous, though prefers right hand in most instances as it is more stable.
      * 【Sexuality】: Bisexual


    習性【Trait; Innate】: Jibamoru Clan Kekkei Genkai
    Jibamoru clansmen are known for their strange Kekkei Genkai, an ability which makes them a living magnet, sort of speak. The chakra of these people posses strong magnetic properties, so much so that they can actually convert their chakra in magnetic fields with a wide range of possibilities, both defensive and offensive as they are essentially able to control any magnetic field around them, manipulate any and all ferromagnetic structures around them, and even serve as a magnet him/herself for these objects to gravitate towards themselves. because of this, it's not uncommon to see these clansmen indulge heavily in iron-rich foods to increase their own magnetic potency. It is a rather rare and useful ability, especially because of the fact that those with the ability to use the blood line are few even within the Clan itself and thus any member who wields it is highly praised, and easily noticed as the eyes of those who awaken to the ability are of a crimson shade, with two aquamarine birthmarks appearing just beneath their eyes.

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    習性【Trait; Elemental Affinity】: Raiton; Doton; Katon

    雑報【Basic Techniques】
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    雑報【Kenjutsu】
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    雑報【Ninjutsu】
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    雑報【Shinobi Tools】
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    PostSubject: Re: Jibamoru, Yuudai   Jibamoru, Yuudai Icon_minitimeSat Feb 26, 2011 5:43 am

    由来書【Historical Background】
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    家族【Family】
      * 【Parents】: Jibamoru Aiko; Jibamoru Hisao
      * 【Siblings】: Jibamoru Misato; Hyuuga Houzuki (adoptive)
      * 【Marital Status】: Single
      * 【Spouse/Partner】: N/A
      * 【Children】: ?????


    雑報【Others】
      * 【Chakra Taint】: Tainted by the Gobi's Chakra while trapped within it's belly, his own chakra is tinged with that of the Bijuu's. As a by-product of this, he exhibits slightly higher than normal agility, dexterity, stamina, and chakra.
      * 【Partial Blindness】: One of the reasons Houzuki left his eyes to his best friend as his final act is because Yuudai was born with a defective eye that was incapable of sight. This eye, naturally without pigment, bore a appearance similar to a Hyuuga's and was one of the reason's Houzuki first approached him and began their friendship due to his mistaking Yuudai for another Hyuuga. While mistaken, it was still the beginning of a great companionship.
      * 【Life's Goal】: Yuudai aspires to seek out and claim the Rikudou Sennin no Hougu, master their powers, and become immortal in name as a Shinobi on par with the fabled Rikudou Sennin himself.
      * 【Addiction】: Unusual for just about anyone, Yuudai is strangely addicted to onigiri.


    This Application gives credit to the following Websites\Forums\People:
    Naruto and all Naruto Universe related references © Kishimoto Masashi; Osy057 for use of his artwork and visual character design. And my loving fiance who put up with my silly time-consuming RP endeavors and helped give life to this character.


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    PostSubject: Re: Jibamoru, Yuudai   Jibamoru, Yuudai Icon_minitimeSat Feb 26, 2011 5:44 am

    Done, and Ready for Review!~
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    PostSubject: Re: Jibamoru, Yuudai   Jibamoru, Yuudai Icon_minitimeSun Feb 27, 2011 5:09 pm

    I've already spoken to you about some things in chat prior to becoming a mod, but I'll let you try to speak with the others so you can at least state your case. Good luck my friend. So bumping so this young man can get a review whenever you guys are ready.
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    PostSubject: Re: Jibamoru, Yuudai   Jibamoru, Yuudai Icon_minitimeMon Feb 28, 2011 7:39 am

    I'll look at this once I get home.
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    PostSubject: Re: Jibamoru, Yuudai   Jibamoru, Yuudai Icon_minitimeMon Feb 28, 2011 9:51 pm

    Spoiler:

    These should be B-rank


    Secondly, Raikiri is a variation of chidori which needs to be purchased first in order to learn Raikiri. Kirin is also a special jutsu like chidori, as is Lightning Armor. Sadly all chidori spots have been taken, however it is possible to learn a special jutsu IC from someone who knows it, and since I am also a missing-nin and in possesion of chidori I will gladly teach it to you.

    I'm also not sure about the Byakugan. An implanted Doujutsu needs to be gained by purchasing Doujutsu implantation first and then retrieving the eye IC, although I'm not sure if someone has given you permission.
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    PostSubject: Re: Jibamoru, Yuudai   Jibamoru, Yuudai Icon_minitimeMon Feb 28, 2011 10:55 pm

    My sources had listed those as C rank, but if need be i can change them to B. As for Raikiri, Lighting Armor, and Kirin should I just blank/cross them off till I acquire them ICly? If need be that's ok but i would've really liked to keep them.

    As for the Byakugan, I would really like to be allowed to keep it as there are (to my knowledge and checking) 2 Hyuuga characters in total in the Forum and I doubt either would be willing to roll over and die for my character's sake. Plus, My character's acquisition is kind've a deeply woven part of his History and wouldn't really make sense otherwise.
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    PostSubject: Re: Jibamoru, Yuudai   Jibamoru, Yuudai Icon_minitimeTue Mar 01, 2011 7:54 am

    Yuudai its best just to remove those jutsu for now. Not saying you cant have them, but you must buy them. Spots are opening up so there may be some room to purchase these jutsu. But overall you need at least 1500pts to get a few of these jutsu. The byakugan thing I can agree with, but you'll still need to pay 900 pts. Which currently you do not have. I think we could allow an npc for your character, but still the points make it a problem.
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    PostSubject: Re: Jibamoru, Yuudai   Jibamoru, Yuudai Icon_minitimeTue Mar 01, 2011 8:11 am

    Agreed
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    PostSubject: Re: Jibamoru, Yuudai   Jibamoru, Yuudai Icon_minitimeTue Mar 01, 2011 8:24 am

    So basically my design will be flawed, and underpowered until I can accrue 2-3k points or find people to teach me the abilities (if that doesn't cost points too) *sigh* Well, butchering done. Everything is removed and fixed.
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    PostSubject: Re: Jibamoru, Yuudai   Jibamoru, Yuudai Icon_minitimeTue Mar 01, 2011 8:25 am

    Why not add some new custom jutsu if you feel your char is underpowerd?
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    PostSubject: Re: Jibamoru, Yuudai   Jibamoru, Yuudai Icon_minitimeTue Mar 01, 2011 8:29 am

    Because I had a very particular and strict design for him, I come from a background of D&D and min-maxing so to deviate from the design means a whole new one and I don't want to do that. The techniques I had picked were picked for a reason, it's why I had less than 40 in total when I finished. I didn't need any more, as my battle plan for the character was already set, even buffered by RP-oriented jutsu to boot. So if i can't have what I tried for, my only option is to wait til I can afford them or acquire them.
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    PostSubject: Re: Jibamoru, Yuudai   Jibamoru, Yuudai Icon_minitimeTue Mar 01, 2011 8:30 am

    Hmm I see, well its your choice. If you happen to change your mind I can help you create some customs if you like.


    Other then that approved 1/2
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    PostSubject: Re: Jibamoru, Yuudai   Jibamoru, Yuudai Icon_minitimeTue Mar 01, 2011 8:33 am

    Your Byakugan can be granted in a flash back type of rp. I am okay with you getting it NPC wise as long as you pay for it and essentailly I believe being taught ic is free. I hate to do this to you, but can you remove the nintai too? it's a jutsu with the Lighting Armor mate.
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    PostSubject: Re: Jibamoru, Yuudai   Jibamoru, Yuudai Icon_minitimeWed Mar 02, 2011 5:21 am

    Why can't I keep them? they only utilize the Lightning Armor to make the attacks more potent, without it its just regular taijutsu thats less powerful. if I can't keep them the njust please delete this profile soI can just rewrite the whole character differently cause I can't see having it hack away almost half my entire list of jutsu just to have an ok.
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    PostSubject: Re: Jibamoru, Yuudai   Jibamoru, Yuudai Icon_minitimeWed Mar 02, 2011 9:18 am

    Well I kinda don't want to but yes I agree it does make the attacks more potent, but it's speciaclly used with Lighting Armor. It's like using Kaiten without knowing Gentle Fist or like using Leaf Whirlwind without knowing Goken and like using Hidden Lotus without knowing gates. It will be in denied/inactive profiles if you change your mind.
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    PostSubject: Re: Jibamoru, Yuudai   Jibamoru, Yuudai Icon_minitimeThu Mar 03, 2011 4:24 am

    ok, done once more. I've altered his history to reflect the current absence of his Hyuuga eye, removed all Special Jutsu and added new jutsu to make up for the lost ones. lemme know how it is, hopefully I can be accepted now
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    PostSubject: Re: Jibamoru, Yuudai   Jibamoru, Yuudai Icon_minitimeThu Mar 03, 2011 7:55 am

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    PostSubject: Re: Jibamoru, Yuudai   Jibamoru, Yuudai Icon_minitimeThu Mar 03, 2011 11:29 am

    Approved 2/2
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